Friday, August 30, 2013

Week 4 Readings and Responses



Response to “The New Negro,” by Darryl Pinckney

               “The New Negro” is a selected excerpt from Darryl Pinckney’s novel “High Cotton.”  The novel, while fiction, hews closely to Mr. Pinckney’s life, telling the tale of an unnamed man raised in an educated, middle-class black family in Indianapolis during the 1950’s and 1960’s.  The narrator, like Mr. Pinckney, goes on to attend Columbia University and live in New York City. 
                This particular excerpt examines the ambivalence and confusion associated with growing up as a middle-class black person, establishing a complicated relationship between the past, present, and future of the black community, as well as examining the ways in which reality differs from the ways that we talk about reality. 
                This selection opens with the narrator’s commentary on his discovery that he is black – it is “something [he] figured out on the sly” – and the optimistic feeling that that “The great thing about finding out [he] was a Negro was that [he] could look forward to going places in the by and by that [he] would not have been asked to as a white boy” (64).  This optimistic assertion, bizarre perhaps in its lack of mention of all the other, less “great” things that being a young black person in 1950’s and 60’s America would entail, sets the tone for the rest of the piece, which alternates between positive, cheerful statements and qualifying caveats that reveal a hidden, darker side to the story being told.
                For the young man in the story, he is at the “glossy edge of the New Frontier,” and is separate from the work and workers of the past, all the work having been done (64).  As we quickly see, however, maintaining one’s place at the “glossy edge” requires constant vigilance and work, and the messages that one hears about the “New Frontier” are mixed and confusing.  He writes, “All men were created equal, but even so, lots of mixed messages with sharp teeth waiting under my Roy Rogers pillow” (64).  Vigilance is a constant requirement and pressure is just as constant – there is “nothing to fear, though every time you left the house for a Spelling Bee or a Music Memory Contest the future of the future hung in the balance” (65). 
                This piece is made up primarily of such contradictions.  “You were not an immigrant . . . but still you did not belong the great beyond out there,” the narrator tells us.  The community of the “Also Chosen” is united, but also not, for “United we stood, which did not include everyone on the block” (65).  Perhaps the most shocking and illustrative contradiction refers to the local swimming pools.  One pool (the white pool) is off-limits, and the pool which is available “had something floating in it that put your mother off” (65).  He writes that the outside world could not “stop His truth from marching on, but until His truth made it as far as restricted Broadripple Park, you did not go swimming. . .” (65). 
                The narrator’s relationship with his present, and the contradictions within it, is  intimately connected to his relationship with his past and the history of those who have come before him.  This is also a complicated relationship, for while these older folks might only be the people far away who send the “token checks that come on birthdays,” they are also something much more powerful, for “the claims that the past had on you were like cold hands in the dark” (66).  This powerful past extends in its power into the present, drawing on generations upon generations of people:
the ranks of the old-timers promised never to thin.  They enlisted the departed in their number, on their side, which added to their collective power to dominate those of you who would never know what they knew (66).
                This burden of the past notwithstanding, the narrator does somehow manage to un-burden himself for a time—“escape I did, the burden of consciousness was lifted from my round little shoulders, and for a while there I was gorgeously out of it.” 
                As with some of the other selections that Gillan and Mazziotti Gillan make, I am left wondering about the textual world outside of this selection (and inside of the novel from which it comes).  As we see, the narrator only escapes “for a while there,” leaving me to wonder for how long he does escape, how he does so, and what causes him to return to the difficult task of carrying that “burden of consciousness.”

Read More:

DARRYL PINCKNEY and Jan Garden Castro
The American Poetry Review , Vol. 23, No. 6 (NOVEMBER/DECEMBER 1994), pp. 9-14

Response to Father from Asia by Shirley Geok-lin Lim

                The poem Father from Asia, by Shirley Geok-lin Lim, is an intensely angry and haunting poem that addresses the past.  More specifically, the speaker speaks to her father, examining the ways in which we deal with memory and the past  and their power over the present and the way that we view the world.  Here, memory possesses a fearsome power to “crush” everything in its path, and to color all things with which it is connected.
                The tone of this poem is incredibly angry and accusatory, though simultaneously intimate.  The speaker is speaking directly to her father, calmly detailing the ways in which he failed her, and fighting against the power that memory has to destroy one’s self and that which one loves.
                The father that we read about in this poem is a powerful figure, and associated with poverty and violence.  He is “. . . dangerous, father  / of poverty,” and his hands are like “Large hollow bowls” that are “. . . empty / stigmata of poverty . . .” (19)  This is a father who, even in his absence, is a “ghost / who eats his own children,” – he is her father,  and the father of nine other children, and yet he is the “father of nothing, from whose life / I have learned nothing for myself.”  The speaker is clear, she wants nothing to do with this man, and yet he is still present, still with her.  She writes: “I renounce you, keep you in my sleep, / keep you two oceans away, ghost / who eats his own children.”      
                Before this terrible ghost, the speaker’s response is to forget, or at least “dare not remember.”  Forgetting is of course a powerful tool, though perhaps a difficult one to yield, as memories tend to be creative and resilient, demonstrating an enviable power to survive.  One may “renounce” one’s father, as the speaker does, but he may still visit in one’s dreams, when our power to forget is a less valid option, as seems to occur here.  Unfortunately, as ironic process theory has shown us, not thinking of a pink elephant is difficult to do when trying not to think of a pink elephant. 
                Memory, we see, is a dangerous and violent force, possessing a power akin to the original action or person upon which it has been founded.  Memory is a “wheel that crushes,” and which has the power to damage and destroy all that it touches.  Here, we see that “Asia” – an entire continent – is not to blame for the violent and painful past of the speaker – “Asia who loved his children, / who didn’t know abandonment,” and yet the presence of the speaker’s father “at the center of the world” has tainted all memories of the place, and now “Asia is dust, is dust.”  

More to Consider

In regard to Nash Candelaria's "The Day the Cisco Kid Shot John Wayne," it might be interesting to check out this episode of Radiolab, (a WNYC program distributed by NPR) which takes a look at memory and forgetting.



                 

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